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tobebassist33 Member Since October 19, 2009
My fun night after school by Scrypt 5384 days ago
tobebassist33 5855 days ago
- 3 + This is an intense story, it was good! The only thing I would suggest is a little bit more of a story before the sex scene. Just enough to make the reader anxious, but not too much because I hate having to read 2-3 pages of intro. Great job though, keep i