 
					
							sugaray
							Member Since October 19, 2009
						
													
											
	
	
	
		getting fucked at night
	
	
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					 watchout
	
	
		 5383 days ago
				watchout
	
	
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									 sugaray
			
			
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 watchout
	
	
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				watchout
	
	
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				How old are you?  May 10 years old?  The punctuation and sentence structure of your story are horrible.  Your words continue on and on and on until the reader has no clue as to what you are talking about.  I finally ceased my reading of your story because
				
		
	
	
	
	
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				excellent story- it kept my rapt attention
				
		
	