 
					
							smithbob
							Member Since October 19, 2009
						
													
											
	
	
	
		Failure
	
	
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					 dragola
	
	
		 5384 days ago
				dragola
	
	
		 5384 days ago
	
	
		
			
									 smithbob
			
			
				 5856 days ago
								smithbob
			
			
				 5856 days ago
			
		
		
											 dragola
	
	
		 5384 days ago
				dragola
	
	
		 5384 days ago
	
	 smithbob
			
			
				 5856 days ago
								smithbob
			
			
				 5856 days ago
			
		
													  
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				Average story. Good as short story though. Spelling/Grammar are good. Work on senses. 65/100
				
		
	