 
					
							schmee
							Member Since October 19, 2009
						
													
											
	
	
	
		A Curious Little Sister (Part 2)
	
	
	
	
		
			
			
		
		
												
										
				would have been good had you rememberd to space out your paragraphs.....
				
		
	
	
	
	
		My Turn (Pt. 1)
	
	
	
	
		
			
			
		
		
												
										
				It has patental
				
		
	
	
	
	
		A Family In Love
	
	
	
	
		
			
			
		
		
												
										
				i cant Beleave i even read this, No kind of storie what so ever
No Paragraphs no Qotations, no plot no nothing but a bunch of words......please never Write a storie agein in your life
	No Paragraphs no Qotations, no plot no nothing but a bunch of words......please never Write a storie agein in your life
	
	
	
		How I Compelled My Own Madam,My Boss,To Have Sex With Me!
	
	
	
	
		
			
			
		
		
												
										
				dont ever write agein!
dont ever write agein!
dont ever write agein!
dont ever write agein!
dont ever write agein!
dont ever write agein!
dont ever write agein!
	dont ever write agein!
dont ever write agein!
dont ever write agein!
dont ever write agein!
dont ever write agein!
dont ever write agein!
	
	
	
		Continuing saga with my niece Sara
	
	
	
	
		
			
			
		
		
												
										
				I like it, one of the better stories out there
				
		
	
	
	
	
		Skating Rink
	
	
	
	
		
			
			
		
		
												
										
				Paragraphs, font size and a better plot
Try reading stories
that get good reveiws and see how they write.
you have Patential but need to find it
	Try reading stories
that get good reveiws and see how they write.
you have Patential but need to find it
	
	
	
		Dominatrix Sister part 4
	
	
	
	
		
			
			
		
		
											
												
										
				But dont write another storie like the 4th one agein.....
				
		
	

Number two: think out your storie BEFORE You
start Writing it