 
					
							natural_aphrodisiac
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		My First Lover
	
	
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					 Luckymann
	
	
		 5383 days ago
				Luckymann
	
	
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									 natural_aphrodisiac
			
			
				 5854 days ago
								natural_aphrodisiac
			
			
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 Luckymann
	
	
		 5383 days ago
				Luckymann
	
	
		 5383 days ago
	
	 natural_aphrodisiac
			
			
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								natural_aphrodisiac
			
			
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				This is one of the best stories that I've ever read on here.  Whether it's true or not makes no difference.  It's well written with no spelling errors, it's believable, and best of all you took your time.  Just... wow.
				
		
	
	
	
	
		Shana – A 16 year old runaway
	
	
	
	
		
			
			
		
		
												
										
				As a doctor, I quite understand the natural tendency to slip into more complicated English, pronounced verbiage, if you will.  It's clear to me that you have an education.  Taking time to set up characters and story, using spell check, etc.  However, usin
				
		
	
	
	
	
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				If this is, as you say, your first story, then you are lying.
I have read this story before, possibly on this very site, almost, if not more than, two years ago.
It's not cool to take credit for other people's work, plagiarizer.
	I have read this story before, possibly on this very site, almost, if not more than, two years ago.
It's not cool to take credit for other people's work, plagiarizer.
