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johnny3434 Member Since October 19, 2009
My Girl by Ragion 5383 days ago
johnny3434 5855 days ago
- 8 + Great story! I like the longer ones and you really drew me into the story with your imagery. One point, make sure you proof read before posting. Brandon's name was Sean when Jessica (later Jennifer) let him in. Other than that, excellent!