 
					
							john2k
							Member Since October 19, 2009
						
													
											
	
	
	
		Cyprus
	
	
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					 freakenya
	
	
		 5383 days ago
				freakenya
	
	
		 5383 days ago
	
	
		
			
									 john2k
			
			
				 5855 days ago
								john2k
			
			
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 freakenya
	
	
		 5383 days ago
				freakenya
	
	
		 5383 days ago
	
	 john2k
			
			
				 5855 days ago
								john2k
			
			
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				good bones of a story but woefully underdeveloped. the main scene was only half a dozen lines long.
				
		
	
	
	
	
		The Night out
	
	
	
	
		
			
			
		
		
											
												
										
				too short and scene was undeveloped. good potential tho
				
		
	