enigma_314
Member Since October 19, 2009
Measuring My Cum Ch. 03
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crackjacka135
5383 days ago
enigma_314
5855 days ago
crackjacka135
5383 days ago
enigma_314
5855 days ago
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surprisingly enough i like these stories. I can almost imagine hearing the mothers voice in her prim and proper english accent....i can't wait for the next chapter to come out
Katty and Her Dad-Part 2 to the Health Class Story
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Dianadoodah
Dianadoodah
has the potential of being a really good series, but paragraph breaks would be helpful
A mom abd her son pt 3
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DshBrdConfssnl15
DshBrdConfssnl15
ok, this storyline started out pretty good with just a mother and her son, but now we have the cousin, the best friend and his girlfriend joining in. what next, the maid?, the lifeguard?, the beach bum? I think you should stick with just the mother and
My Daddy
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naughtydaughter
naughtydaughter
I couldn't believe how incredibly hot this story was. Keep up the good work.
Dawn
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twisted mind
twisted mind
This had the promises of being a really good story if only you had taken some time and thought it out more. Starting new paragraphs is really helpful when writing.
A bond between parents and thier son
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jwest3rdgen
jwest3rdgen
no character development, bad grammar, lack of spell check.........this could have been a pretty good story if SOMEONE else had written it
My sweet little Tanya
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daggdon0
daggdon0
good idea for a story, but i had to stumble my way thru the choppy grammar, run-on sentences, bad spelling.......
Short Tail
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Cade69
Cade69
as previously mentioned by others, the story had a good start but "petered out" towards the end....i was hoping for something a little bit more descriptive, maybe next time
Sleeping Cousin
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hornywriter44090
hornywriter44090
you may want to try a few things called "paragraphs" and "spell check"
Saved Up Spanking
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lau
lau
I don't what it is about these stories concerning Daddy and Little One, but I totally love them. The innocent acting Krissy is absolutely comical, but wickedly sweet at the same time, and you can't help but smile w/Daddy because he's trying to be as serio
Tasting Candi 2
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KaiKenobi
KaiKenobi
The whole story line is good; father lusting after daughter, but the thing that takes away from the story is the misspellings, incorrect punctuation and sentence structure(there were several times I had to reread certain parts of the story to try to under