 
					
							donpepsi2
							Member Since October 19, 2009
						
													
											
	
	
	
		Vacatition with my daughter
	
	
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					 rekrap
	
	
		 5618 days ago
				rekrap
	
	
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											 rekrap
	
	
		 5618 days ago
				rekrap
	
	
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	 donpepsi2
			
			
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				This was a decent story so I gave it a two for that. But the puncuation is just awefull. There's nothing worse than trying to read a story that should be a few paragraphs long but is really one long ass sentence.
				
		
	