darklioness
Member Since October 19, 2009
The making of a critical heir Part 2
by
Storyman-xxx
5384 days ago
darklioness
5855 days ago
Storyman-xxx
5384 days ago
darklioness
5855 days ago
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9
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The second story was even better than the first. It got me hot and wet. I loved it!
Trish's Story 1
by
paul1254
paul1254
Loved the story but the ending wasn't developed enough. Please write some more!
The making of a critical heir
by
Storyman-xxx
Storyman-xxx
This story was well written and well developed. I would have liked to have read about more interaction between Paula and her husband once he heard about her encounters. Keep up the good work. I'll be looking for more from you.
Tessa'a Jungle Adventure
by
kureeus
kureeus
Good first attempt, but please break up your stories into paragraphs. It makes for an easier read. Keep up the good work. Am looking forward to part 2.