LucOuarm
Member Since October 19, 2009
Incest with my dad-True
by
jkwon
5564 days ago
LucOuarm
5855 days ago
jkwon
5564 days ago
LucOuarm
5855 days ago
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Really, you should start this story all over again instead of following parts. I can see what you have to say but with the poor spelling and grammar and huge disorganization, your story has trouble getting through.
Underground Home Alone
by
young4fun
young4fun
One paragraph and short too. You need to put some more effort into this.
First Encounter
by
rodheryn
rodheryn
Nice idea, but wasted because you did not develop it very far. Twice as long would still have been too short. Also check the spelling better.
Tessa'a Jungle Adventure
by
kureeus
kureeus
I gave up on this wall of words because of the lack of spacing. Too bad you turned off a reader.