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Harper Valley Revisited – Part 2 – The Party by Janet2 5810 days ago
coldinmn 5856 days ago
- 5 + The story was not that bad but the fact that it was "redundant" of the original Harper Valley detracted from your effort. I think I would have found it much, much more enjoyable if you had written it from Ashton's perspective. Perhaps you could go on an