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I was supposed to be baby sitting by davidj 5384 days ago
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- 10 + good story, but the spelling, grammar, and formatting were trocious. Go back to 5th grade.
Born to be a Teen Slut by tyrunner 5384 days ago
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- 10 + Awesome story, more, more more! (possibly longer next time)
A Tropical Cruze Gone BAD by johnny123 5384 days ago
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- 0 + You had a good premise for a story, and that's about it. This story was rushed, unbeliveable, and had more spelling errors than i can count on my hands
The Three gals and myself. by Juicyiceman 5451 days ago
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- 10 + Learn subject/verb agreement and learn to keep your tenses consistent
The Halloween Treat That Keeps on Tricking by Victoriajohn 5830 days ago
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- 10 + Amazing story, 10/10!