 
					
							ZODA
							Member Since October 19, 2009
						
													
											
	
	
	
		The Unforgiven
	
	
		by 
					 MarkJames
	
	
		 5383 days ago
				MarkJames
	
	
		 5383 days ago
	
	
		
			
									 ZODA
			
			
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											 MarkJames
	
	
		 5383 days ago
				MarkJames
	
	
		 5383 days ago
	
	 ZODA
			
			
				 5855 days ago
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				I gave you a 4-star before, and I apologise. The writing is excellent, your last story was great, and you even spell words correctly and add spacing so peoples eyes dont glaze over reading it! (Its a rare thing nowadays!) Keep up the great work!
				
		
	