Sonaku
Member Since October 19, 2009
A x-mas story
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chaos_thanatos
5459 days ago
Sonaku
5856 days ago
chaos_thanatos
5459 days ago
Sonaku
5856 days ago
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There is a rating lower then one you nit. It's called a ZERO! Anyways its an ok story, try useing spellcheck. Actualy learn how to spell correctly. Also try adding a bit more detail so we can "Become" the charecters, so we can actualy lose ourselves in th
My sweet niece
by
kev922
kev922
Great grammer, good story, very well structured plot, a little tipsy on the emotion. Though for shortness I will give this one a 4/5.
The next day with Sarah
by
kev922
kev922
Same as your other one. Very good grammer, Well structured Plot & setting. A bit better on the emotion part. overall good story. I give this story a 5/5