 
					
							OedipusRex
							Member Since October 19, 2009
						
													
											
	
	
	
		Devious Pt. 3
	
	
	
	
		
			
			
		
		
												
										
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		My Girls Chapter 17
	
	
	
	
		
			
			
		
		
												
										
				The story seems to flow.
I'm guessing you just numbered it wrong?
	I'm guessing you just numbered it wrong?
	
	
	
		Beth's Mom
	
	
	
	
		
			
			
		
		
												
										
				yes, part 2 please.
				
		
	
	
	
	
		2 Families, 1 Vacation     Chapters 1 - 4
	
	
	
	
		
			
			
		
		
												
										
				The next 4 chapters are up under "Friends and Neighbors Chapters 1 - 8"
				
		
	
	
	
	
		Friends  and Neighbors - Chapters 1 - 8
	
	
	
	
		
			
			
		
		
												
										
				If there is no further interest, consider the story over.
				
		
	
	
	
	
		Mom is Passed Out Little Boys will Play
	
	
	
	
		
			
			
		
		
												
										
				Well done.  Much better than 95% of what I've seen on this site lately.
The quality has gone WAY down.
I look forward to chapter 2.
	The quality has gone WAY down.
I look forward to chapter 2.
	
	
	
		My Girls Chapter 13
	
	
	
	
		
			
			
		
		
											
												
										
				In the immmortal words of Chandler's Janis:  OH...MY...GOD!!!
You killed off Cyndi??
I have 3 girls of my own, and I was almost crying.
That is NOT supposed to happen in this genre.
Now, that being said, VERY well written.
Given that you have entered
	You killed off Cyndi??
I have 3 girls of my own, and I was almost crying.
That is NOT supposed to happen in this genre.
Now, that being said, VERY well written.
Given that you have entered


Keep it up!!