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MzDeviancy Member Since October 19, 2009
Me and my Brother by WTFISUP2424 5384 days ago
MzDeviancy 5855 days ago
- 1 + You need to separate your sentences -especially in the last paragraph-, work on capitalization, and punctuation. My editor's a perfectionist nutcase, but it makes you better. If you're old enough, you should try going on Literotica and checking out the vo