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M.Savrem Member Since October 19, 2009
Mrs Hansen
M.Savrem 5854 days ago
- 6 + The description of the oral is sex is the best part of this story. What would of given it a higher rating was if you wrote a little more of an introduction, described what the chracters looked liked, and maybe gave a motive for Mrs. Hansen to go after Jas
Michael's Diary: 9/22/2004
M.Savrem 5854 days ago
- 10 + My apologies for the error that occured with this work. A portion of the body was moved to the end. I'm not sure what happened since I copied and pasted this straight from a word doc. Anyhow, I have resubmitted the story, double checking to make sure eve