M.Savrem
Member Since October 19, 2009
Mrs Hansen
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rocktola
5382 days ago
M.Savrem
5854 days ago
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The description of the oral is sex is the best part of this story. What would of given it a higher rating was if you wrote a little more of an introduction, described what the chracters looked liked, and maybe gave a motive for Mrs. Hansen to go after Jas
Michael's Diary: 9/22/2004
My apologies for the error that occured with this work. A portion of the body was moved to the end. I'm not sure what happened since I copied and pasted this straight from a word doc. Anyhow, I have resubmitted the story, double checking to make sure eve
