Lozier
Member Since October 19, 2009
Family Farm Fun!
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XAshleyX
5383 days ago
Lozier
5855 days ago
XAshleyX
5383 days ago
Lozier
5855 days ago
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6
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I've read worse, but I've also read better, but how is this an animal story? There was a tiny instance of animal sex and thats it.
Britney and the Beast
by
sexkitty
sexkitty
Much better than a lot I've read recently though personally I prefer something a bit longer it was a decently lengthed story. Good job.
One Day My Life Was Great
by
DJ Gangsta
DJ Gangsta
This is a decent idea turned into pure crap, if there was a rating less than one star you'd get it.
Dominatrix Sister part 2
by
uosdwisrdewoh
uosdwisrdewoh
I loved the story, both parts. As for it not getting repetative, maybe have her take him out in public? Some little house party thrown by a classmate?
Slut Jackpot
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themanhoe99
themanhoe99
dry humping does not constitute a sex story, and it certainly doesnt belong in group
Teacher teach so meany things!
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hott_surfer109
hott_surfer109
It's a strong concept ruined by a weak author. You misspelled words, skipped words, structured paragraphs poorly, and basically did everything else wrong. Next time write it in a program that has spell check, I'd suggest the latest release of word, that w
Me and Mah Sisters
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icekold666
icekold666
It was a good premise and I would like to hear more but it went way too fast and was way too short.
Horny Sister
by
Mindmaster
Mindmaster
This story is a bit cliche, but a good read nonetheless. You could have made it better with some detail, eye and hair color, various sizes, height weight etc. Your paragraph issues weren't anything major enough to dissuade the average person just wanting
Make Me Into an Anal Whore, Daddy!
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mykyl0
mykyl0
This was good, but in an easy way. Like hunting with a grenade. You get the kill, but there's no finesse, no skill needed. Your writing should be a delicate piece of art and it just isn't.
After the party
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Master_Tirade
Master_Tirade
You should work on your grammar, and maybe lengthen it a bit. Great premise but poorly executed.
Big Sis, Little Sis
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wtfsuperman
wtfsuperman
Another wasted concept on an author who doesn't know how to make something last. You need to make it longer, everything else was great.
My sister's friend
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honestdan
honestdan
i could literally crap out a better story. it was too short, to fast, there were no details, no nothing
a night at the Vet - pt 3
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usafslut1
usafslut1
These are very good I can't wait for part 4. Maybe one of them fucks her ass?
My First Babysitting Job
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hiddenpleasurz4u
hiddenpleasurz4u
It was a good idea, but you ended it way too fast. Longer is better. You also need to work on paragraph structure...and actually having paragraphs....
Vacatition with my daughter
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rekrap
rekrap
Very very good if more people on this site wrote like this all the others would have to shut down from no activity.
Taking story down
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Taiyed
Taiyed
Keep up the great work I look forward to seeing more after the slew of trash from other authors recently.
Teaching Lydia
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katiestriapach
katiestriapach
Usually I can find something to complain about with every story, but the only thing wrong with this was that it was just too short.