LazyRaven
Member Since October 19, 2009
Mike and his mother visit DC
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lutz88
5383 days ago
LazyRaven
5855 days ago
lutz88
5383 days ago
LazyRaven
5855 days ago
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Very Good story. I live in D.C. so I appreciate it. Write more and I will read all of you stories. Good job.
A week at Aunt Molly's - Part 1
by
Stixxx_06
Stixxx_06
wright more, it was clear, interesting, no spelling errors, kept me hooked, and read like a book. A nice change of pace from the average story posted. It wasn't tedious or redundant, it didn't have to many details. Keep wrighting them the way you wrote
The Girl In The Park
by
Swampdonkey_2007
Swampdonkey_2007
This was the dumbest piece of shit to ever hit the internet. Funny joke tho.
Me and my mom
by
auron626
auron626
Your story fucking sucked. you lacked description and skill. You werent descriptive or set the mood, which are the essence to an erotic story. If you ever decide to write again do it more skillfull. Read some of the other stories and learn how people
Sex with my Dad part 2- True Story
by
jkwon
jkwon
If i was a critic i would rant and rave in your reviews but since i am not ill just shout out more, more, more!!