 
					
							JelloBibBoy
							Member Since October 19, 2009
						
													
											
	
	
	
		slave_ofthe_jackel2
	
	
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					 Hannah
	
	
		 5384 days ago
				Hannah
	
	
		 5384 days ago
	
	
		
			
									 JelloBibBoy
			
			
				 5855 days ago
								JelloBibBoy
			
			
				 5855 days ago
			
		
		
 Hannah
	
	
		 5384 days ago
				Hannah
	
	
		 5384 days ago
	
	 JelloBibBoy
			
			
				 5855 days ago
								JelloBibBoy
			
			
				 5855 days ago
			
		
													  
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				It was a good story overall but really cliche.  Also, you should learn how to spell or do spell check or something because at parts it is hard to figure out the words.
				
		
	
	
	
	
		only love.... lifetime lust
	
	
	
	
		
			
			
		
		
											
												
										
				the details were good but learn how to spell properly and not this ghetto spelling
				
		
	