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Jadson Member Since October 19, 2009
My Mother( MY $100 WHORE) PT. 3 by gharper 5385 days ago
Jadson 5857 days ago
- 4 + This was a great story. Well illustrated, good layout. The only thing wrong is that there is no separation of verbal and narratives. For example:

"Hi" Said John

I opened the window and replied, "hey"

But other than that it was great. One of the bet