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A night of freedom by punkrocker1180 5384 days ago
Guardman 5856 days ago
- 9 + I liked it. I thought it was written very well and to say it made me hard would be a big understatement. I thought you had good grammar and a great story line. My only comment to you is to make the next story you write longer and more discriptive, other t