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Chasewood Academy pt. 1 by ChasewoodAcademy 5383 days ago
Greytemper 5855 days ago
- 8 + I really enjoyed the non-sex storywriting. But as for the sex scene, it just didn't click. Maybe it was the long descriptive sentences. I'm not sure, but it felt disruptive. I think I'd rate the sexscene 3 of 10.

But your other writing is great, so I
My Neighbor by bigguy32 5383 days ago
Greytemper 5855 days ago
- 1 + You seem to write a little whenever you have time. My advice is that you continue doing that, but don't post it until the story is finished